Sunday, January 20, 2013

Excerpt from Surprise Project

So I have a bit of a surprise, impromptu project releasing early next month, February 12th to be exact...I just put it up on goodreads last Saturday, and you can check it out here.  I'm very nervous about it, to be honest, but I was just preparing some excerpts for a release blitz and I thought...hey, these aren't so bad.  So I've decided to post an impromptu excerpt.  Read it before you visit the book description on Goodreads, and see if you can guess what it's about!

I still remember the day I first heard about the rains that would supposedly fall till our cottages were submerged, our animals drowned, though I can’t recall who told me, or whether I simply overheard the gossip.  But I will never forget the way I tore through the village, heading straight for my father at work in the smithy, and I will never forget how I ran inside without calling out first, even though I was forbidden to do so.  Father was pouring molten bronze into molds, but to my young mind and eyes, it was as if he held liquid fire just a few hands’ breadth from his body, at the end of a long, precariously thin wooden handle.  If he was a more excitable man, a less steady one, there might have been a terrible accident.  As it was, the worst I received was a scolding once Father put the smoking-hot pot down on the smith stone and led me back outside, away from the open flame and molten metal.  And even his reprimand was light, once he realized how frightened I was; he never could be harsh with me.  I remember how he gathered me in his arms, so close that I rested my cheek against the warm leather of his apron and breathed in the smoky residue that lingered there.  He told me that there would be no flood, that old Noah wasn’t right in the head, though I should never say so aloud.
“But how can you know?” I whispered into his chest.
He breathed out, long and deep, and I bit my lip as I waited for him to speak.  “I suppose nothing in this world is certain,” he said at last.  “But I promise that if you, if any member of our family is ever in danger, I’ll do everything I can to protect you.”
Now, as I wash Father’s tunics in the river, I realize I can’t remember the last time I visited him at the smithy, or even exchanged more than a few words with him over supper.  The ark has kept him busy, I suppose.
It takes me a minute to notice Derya is no longer chattering beside me, and I crane my neck to see her standing beside Jorin, facing away from the river.  “Can you imagine,” she says softly, “all of this, just…gone?”
I turn and follow her gaze, taking it all in: the mud-brick cottages, the bits of straw embedded in their walls and roofs gleaming golden in the sun; the fields of wheat and barley, low and parched now that the harvest has ended; the pens of grazing goats and cattle and sheep; the forested hills that cup our valley in their protective hands.  It may not be much, in the scheme of the wide world I’ve heard tales of but never seen, and I may not always feel welcome here.  But this is the only home I’ve ever known, and no, I cannot imagine it destroyed.     

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